Hi, gpgopika. This was neat, and of course, creepy. (I hope it's ok for the feedback to be in the comments). For me, spelling and grammar mistakes make it harder to get into the story, and you did have a few of those. Nice work, though. :)
Don't worry I meant the feedback to be in the comments anyway hehe (although I don't mind if anyone sends it any other way)
I had finished the game late at night (with like a couple of hours left to submit oops), so I didn't have enough time to proofread this, but I 100% will go through the game again and update it (I knew I had a lot of spelling and grammar stuff anyway), hopefully I can update it this weekend (・ω・)
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Hi, gpgopika. This was neat, and of course, creepy. (I hope it's ok for the feedback to be in the comments). For me, spelling and grammar mistakes make it harder to get into the story, and you did have a few of those. Nice work, though. :)
Hi David :) Thank you so much for the feedback!
Don't worry I meant the feedback to be in the comments anyway hehe (although I don't mind if anyone sends it any other way)
I had finished the game late at night (with like a couple of hours left to submit oops), so I didn't have enough time to proofread this, but I 100% will go through the game again and update it (I knew I had a lot of spelling and grammar stuff anyway), hopefully I can update it this weekend (・ω・)
Thanks so much again (≡^∇^≡)